Fresh Baby's Breath Poem by Lawrence S. Pertillar

Fresh Baby's Breath



The boldest moves to take,
Are those one makes...
To shake away from the past.
And divorcing from it quick!

The faster that is done,
An invited switch for a new beginning comes.
And a space that can be cleared to place...
The floral arrangement,
Of fresh baby's breath arriving.

A reminder...
For the one who commits.
With an intention,
For this kind of 'marriage' to last!
And welcoming the birth of it.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lawrence S. Pertillar 01 November 2008

Thank you, April for your suggestion. Poem is 'tighter' now. Much appreciated. L

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Lawrence S. Pertillar 01 November 2008

Don't leave me abandoned at the 'alter'.

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Great Thought. But poem does need some edit.

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