Freedom - A Chain Verse Poem by M. Asim Nehal
Freedom - A Chain Verse
Soon I shall roam free
Free from the burden of this body
Body that captivated me for long
Long enough to keep me beguile.
I shall rejoice once free from this accountability,
Accountability that kept me in check with time,
Time to pass and prove that I am still alive and living,
Living a life which is predestined,
Destined to certain path and ways.
Tomorrow when this soul will see the light,
Light of the day from the darkness of this body,
Body which is mortal, but nurtures false ego,
Ego, a burden that forced mind to enjoy.
Enjoy the dust with which you are made of and
And I shall roam free from every hassles.
A philosophical poem, body is temporary and soul is eternal. No one has seen soul.
Great lines from soul to the body: Enjoy the dust with which you are made of and And I shall roam free from every hassles.
Superb: Tomorrow when this soul will see the light, Light of the day from the darkness of this body, Body which is mortal, but nurtures false ego, Ego, a burden that forced mind to enjoy.
Classic poem using last word first in second line. Enjoyed reading it.
Exce; ; ent...Enjoy the dust with which you are made of and And I shall roam free from every hassles.
A very finest Chain Verse, Asim Sir! I have enjoyed very much this fantastic Chain Verse.5 Stars!
When the soul is free from the bondage of body, how wonderful it must be! A wonderful imagination!
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5/8/2024 8:11:25 AM # 1.0.0.1119
roam, roam here; and I'm roaming your poetic chain verse~