Freedom Poem by Heather Rhoden

Freedom

Rating: 5.0


I want to feel the blade pushed deep.
I want my blood to run free.
I want to feel my soul fade.
I want my heart to melt away.

I want to float in the abyss.
I want blood on my wrists.
I want to float in my mind.
I want no pain until the end of time.

I want to abandon all thoughts
I want no more feelings to be fought.
I want to abandon all reason.
I want to be free of my life's prison.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

For a 'suicide poem', I find this well-written. Interesting perspective. But freedom is found in embracing life, not ousting it. Best to you, t x

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Aldo Kraas 05 September 2007

So what you are trying to tell me is that you are living inside a prison cell I live my life in a prison cell when my mother was around I can understand that you have no free I had no freedom either You have a parent that is dominiring And that your parents don't want to give you any freedom So you have to fight for freedom Yes I don't think your parents understand that you have to live your life and they have to live there's They are not allowing you to decide for yourself They are making all the decisions forr you That is what my mon did It cause alot of demage plus stress on you And the emvironment you live in becomes a bad one I understand that you want to be yourself You have to speak up

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