Fortified Poem by John Weber

Fortified

Rating: 5.0


Erect this rampart around my lone heart
in case we must part before I can start
hoping for more
while I implore
your grace and your art when you must depart.

When current and sea wash right over me
I babble a plea like lonesome debris
while getting towed,
saline bestowed,
until I agree to life’s jubilee.

Tumult shall erase what I can’t replace
to wash that sole trace of bliss from my face
you must return-
make my soul burn
as flames dance to chase my cheerful disgrace.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Patti Masterman 13 October 2009

I love the clever rhyme scheme in here. And the words are so imaginative. I think when others grow up to become adults, poets still stay children in their hearts, and so things may wound them more deeply than others; but also, they still have that rampant creativity that sometimes seems to be lost in adulthood.

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