((Forgotten)) Poem by Seyed Morteza Hamidzadeh

((Forgotten))

Rating: 3.2


O, witnesses of the night

Exile me

To the most distant point of the universe

In the complex area of the vacuum

Moment by moment

I think about my enjoyment

That night

the voice of calligrapher's pen was heard

And i feigned sleep

I became tired

Time

is my place to act

I have acknowledged my faith

I shall go to the cemetery

To dig a grave for myself

but

The weather is cold

It's snowing

And umbrellas

Have put my burial ceremony off

((Poet: Seyed Morteza Hamidzadeh))

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Franca Kenneth 12 June 2012

Poignant write. Keep it up.

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Jerry Hughes 12 May 2012

...excellent word flow Seyed, keep up the good work. Cheers Jerry

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Edward Kofi Louis 02 November 2010

A very nice piece of work. Keep it up and let us learn from you as well.

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Terence George Craddock 27 October 2010

'That night the voice of calligrapher's pen was heard And i feigned sleep I became tired Time is my place to act I have acknowledged my faith' An interesting poem beginning with a plea to 'witnesses of the night' for exile and thus we 'Behold Changing Faces Of Persecution The history of religious persecution the names honour roll of martyrs who have died for their faith goes back thousands of years crosses countries continents genders all sections of societies... the above poem interrelates to the theme of your poem which you have written so well.

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