Forgiveness Poem by mestup poems

Forgiveness

Rating: 4.8


Hanging on devours me,
as if I were attached to a limb,
green and fresh,
with no possibility of breaking.
My heart and my hands
are calloused.

I imagine the limb snapping
on its own.
I am fearful of letting go,
deciding to release
and experience new ground.

Forgiveness will benefit my soul.
I know that, though I
remain hesitant.
The earth below looks
inviting and restorative.

Clutching the limb is
destroying me.
So I jump, and rest
on the cool sweet ground
of pardon.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Peter James Davidson 30 March 2008

splendid imagery..... and how true....growth through forgiveness

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Coach Roth 08 March 2008

Amazing...great imagery and metaphor...well done...will recommend it to my friends...Coach

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