Forget It! Poem by Steven Iceberg
Forget It!
Get off your knees from begging
This dream would never flow
I'm sorry your not the one for me
A BIG FAT NO! ! !
Stop dreaming mate
Dreams go to far
I have to do my thing
SO DON'T BE WHO YOU ARE! ! !
WOW you won't leave
Trying to be my friend
Please go away when
WHEN WILL THIS END! ! !
Your covered in lies
You just want to use me
One thing you do get is to
COMPLETLY AND UTTERLY LOSE ME! ! ! !
wow, Chris, now who's dat? (hope it's not me though...lol.just kidding) .u showed raw diction there and it really showed the pain and grief the persona is going through.(hope it's not u, ryt?) .Many times, we teenagers rush into relationships with ur tender and feeble hearts get them squashed lyk watermelons! ! I think we really need to study the terrain before we venture into this dire issue.oh! and I almost forgot-nice write, Chris.dat was a harsh one!
There is an honesty and earthiness in here. I like the straight forward and direct language. Best Steve
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Delivering Poems Around The World
Poems are the property of their respective owners. All information has been reproduced here for educational and informational purposes to benefit site visitors, and is provided at no charge...
5/9/2024 8:18:16 AM # 1.0.0.1119
ouch! That was a little... well, we all have a few of those 'angry, mean' poems! lol. Words were nicely arranged though, makes the emotion behind it very clear.