Believe Poem by Steven Iceberg

Believe



You've lost your job
The credit crunch is putting you down
You pray to God till your knees ache
Then maybe you'll wake up without a frown

Everyone needs to believe in themselve
Everyone needs to smile
Theres a light beyond the tunnel
Just believe in yourself for awhile

Try to shine the whole day through
I'm sure things can mend
Just keep on believing
All you need is family and a good old friend

I wish we didn't have horrid people
Racist. cruel, even more
If it helps, I will believe
And pray to God until my knees are sore

Believe, Believe, Believe, Believe
Try, Try, Try, Try
Do whatever it takes
Just don't sit and wonder why

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Emily Oldham 08 May 2009

I love it, it's a really inspiring and beautiful poem, don't change a word of it! Athena *** words will change the world ***

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Nangula Immanuel 05 May 2009

WOW! ! i love this poem. it is really good. I am saving it a one of my favourites! Absolutely beautiful. Thanx! ! !

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Ruth Walters 03 May 2009

You have a good heart I love what you say in your poem which is why I've taken the trouble to tidy it up a bit as there were some spelling mistakes and the rhythm was a bit drunk. If you don't like me interferring just tell me. Ruthy: -D See below: You've lost your job The credit crunch put you down You pray to God to let you wake without a frown Everyone needs to believe in themselves Everyone needs to smile Theres a light beyond the tunnel Just believe in yourself for a while Try to shine the whole day through I'm sure all things can mend Just keep on believing All you need are kin and friends. I'm wishing for some happiness No cruelty no more If it helps, I will believe and pray, then pray some more Believe, Believe, Believe, Believe Try and try and try..... Do whatever it takes sweet friends don't sit and wonder why.

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Steven Iceberg

Steven Iceberg

Tokyo, Spain
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