Forever You Poem by jen capaldi

Forever You

Rating: 4.9


Gone from my life
In the blink of an eye
Out of my life
Forever
Forever was short
Not really forever at all
Because your back
Inside of my head
Etching away
Scratching and clawing
Tearing your way
Into my heart and soul
Again
I tried to forget you
But you would not go away
I tried to confine you
But you would not be caged
I tried to deny you
But you are a part of me
I tried to give in
But it was to late
I miss your touch
Your gentle caress
I miss your eyes
Deep and wise
I miss your voice
Sweet music to my ears
I miss your embrace
Shielding me from the world
I miss your love
It kept me strong
Through my trials and tribulations
I loved gazing
Into your eyes
How they would draw me in
Keeping me entranced
I look
And I can't find you near
I'm so consumed by you
That I forget you are really gone
How could I let you go
Why did I not fight
To keep you by my side
Involuntary tears fall freely down my face
As I remember the pain of losing you
How could I let you go
My whole world left with you
And with it you took my heart
I can still feel the empty void
It left inside of me
You were the king of my heart
And I love you still
Aways I will
Deep inside the heart
You carry in your pocket
And deep in my mind
That remembers every part of you
Under the hand that lovingly touched you
And the feeling of sheer bliss
After making love to you
Every memory we created
I wish on every star in the sky
That one day you'll return to me
But I know you won't
And I will never love anyone else again
I love you
And you'll hold my heart
Forever

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

you should put to my boo........les and then it woudl be perfect... The poem is good....... i liked the involuntary tears...... sad, , , , , but good and sweet.

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Prof. Dr. Sakti Chakravorty 25 October 2009

I’ll not miss you and your excellent poem. Always with a smiling ten++ dr.sakti. Please visit my page .Page no 3 [poem 49 I’M NO CELEB] and page 4 [poem 77, O’ YOU MY LUMINISCNT LIPS] or other poems ds

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Maria C 11 September 2009

you did it again: -)

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Chitra - 09 September 2009

heartwrenching write of the pain and loss.....felt by your heart and ironical too that you can't heal it as a large part of it has been taken away by him! emotional 10+

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Keith Hendrickson 07 September 2009

filled with depth and passion. i loved this one... great work

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Dr.subhendu Kar 07 September 2009

tried to forget you But you would not go away I tried to confine you But you would not be caged I tried to deny you But you are a part of me................ true.love yet never forsakes its gleams unto even mortality more we go away from it yet reflects back in multiples whisperig gleams being more enlightened falling sway to mystery as captive soul even being befuddled redounds to glow, , it is a masterpiece impeccably curved in by art of love in dazzling colors of mist, wonderfully engraved in the rune of void by artistic florence of beauty across the falling dew by the night awaiting redemption by different faces of contradiction with varied sheds of metaphors and imagery, philosophy of mystical true love happens to decipher the code of reality where intellect by its amazing tools delves the irrevocable beauty of adherence of loving souls, luscious flow ingeniously in its superb way of unique genre swaddles across the blazing glaze of rainbow,10+++++, thanks for sharing

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