Without You Poem by jen capaldi

Without You

Rating: 3.2


I miss you
Your own selfish pride
Your hubris and narcissism
Is what made you go away
Now I'm comdemmed
To an existence without you
Tortured by the memories
Of the love and happiness
The warmth and love in your embrace
That which I have lost
Haunts me every night and every day
Pain and sorrow has taken it's place
Pain and sorrow I did not desire
Along with fear of being unworthy of love
Alone forever
Never to understand
What I did wrong
Will I ever know
Why you went away
Is it possible you could one day return to my embrace
Because I will love you forever
And I cannot bear the cost of the loss of you

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Prof. Dr. Sakti Chakravorty 25 October 2009

Nice melancholy with touch of oozing love for fiancée Ten to cheer up your fiancée. LOL! dr.sakti. Please read and comment Only Love Amnesia series ds.

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Eyan Desir 10 October 2009

You will live ok Live and love good write

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Tharindu Atukorala 02 October 2009

I enjoy your writing, you speak from the heart, and your emotions are very well expressed...

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 26 August 2009

Will I ever know Why you went away Is it possible you could one day return to my embrace Because I will love you forever And I cannot bear the cost of the loss of you...... u have betrayed me totally.. what a feeling inthe poem..superb. it has touched me all the way...10 read mine miss i miss u..mary is going to marry...all dreams not come true

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