Forces Of Nature - Tanka Poem by Rose Marie Juan-austin
Forces Of Nature - Tanka
Deadly lightning struck
The dry grass at the prairie
The wind swept huge flames
But heaven poured its kindness
Its tears ceased the inferno.
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Great imageries and solace to earth after fire-works. Crafty Tanka.5******
Wow awesome scene depiction! Heavens tears yayy. Kudos! ! !
Brilliant Tanka.heaven's kind ness tears ceased the inferno is really a good metaphor.
The Tanka: Deadly lightning struck The dry grass at the prairie The wind swept huge flames But heaven poured its kindness Its tears ceased the inferno. This Tanka is for me like a painting, very imaginable and impressionistic. So nice to read this Tanka again.It shows more impressionism for me
Beautiful description of when pain strikes and Heavens Compassionate Love! .. God so deeply cares! .. Such a beautifully inspiring poem! .. Definite 5 Stars! ..+++++
The power and beauty of nature is evident in this gorgeous tanka.5 stars.
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5/10/2024 12:04:23 PM # 1.0.0.1119
Powerfully worded, Brilliant Tanka,5 Stars Full and to my Favourites. Thank you for sharing