Forcefield Poem by Lazarus Knix

Forcefield

Rating: 5.0


I am becoming an adult.
In this becoming, I realize,
That all beauty bears a force field.
The sun, it’s fiery focus,
The moon, her white, spectral distance,
-Snowflakes, their ephemeral guile-
A woman….her friends.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Prince Obed de la Cruz 10 November 2009

this one is very well written. Poetic. Very good.

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rago rago 10 November 2009

well crafed words and made it flow easily...................

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