For U Poem by Dhear Vongjalorn

For U



Your beatuy on the outside is just like
u in the inside
i never knew i could meet a person like u
it's like a dream come true. You are popluar
you have fame, you never derserve blame nethier shame.
You don't know me that well but oh well!
This is not like other poems that goes like
roses are red
voilet are blue
this poem different
bcuz it was made 4 u!
For the person i just met this year!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Milica Franchi De Luri 14 November 2009

you have captured the romantic ambiance in this poem, well expresed with poetic atributes...............good job Nice to hear from you................

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u tried to hardwith the rhyming deal but other than that it was a good poem! ! ! ! nice meaning! ! !

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