Footprints Poem by Hanna Collins

Footprints

Rating: 4.9


Loved ones leave footprints
on your heart, or so they say,
But who wants people walking all over
their hearts anyway?
Surely if someone loved you
they would tread gently
So as not to leave a mark.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Santana Marasco 03 June 2006

A 10 from me, because you've said what you want to say, and instead of ranting on you write it beautifully!

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Duncan Wyllie 22 May 2006

Ah now this I like, much in this, so much wisdom, Love Duncan X

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Nick Percowycz 22 May 2006

Some leave footprints, but then some have kicked my heart! Excellent poem! A ten.

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Tracey Collins 21 May 2006

very very true, you keep going girl your poems are real good.

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Patricia Gale 21 May 2006

Yes and some even wear high heels! Boy those are the ones that hurt. A delightful sensible read Patricia Gale

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