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Star Dust

Star Dust

Loonytown (It's an awesome place, right between Candyland and the Strawberry Forest)
Star Dust
Loonytown (It's an awesome place, right between Candyland and the Strawberry Forest)

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Rating: 4.9


Abstract lights,
Twisting along roads,
In a forgotten city,
Floating in empty air,
We were stuck here,
Stuck here in a ghost,
In a ghost of a rain dropp falling,
Falling below the indirect words,
Of the wind that whispers secrets,
Secrets to the shadows cast along,
Along to the skies,
Cut off by black mountains,
With rigid frame,
Ringing with laughter,
Spilled out of the heavens
With watery color,
For the ones standing tall,
On the border wondering,
Words were spoken,
And never forgotten,
Engraved in solid stone,
Hiding in fear of the ones,
The ones that might find them calling.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Emily Oldham 15 November 2008

some beautiful imagery and lovely content... keep writing, thanks Athena *** words will change the world ***

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Kesav Easwaran 26 April 2009

mystic write...nice imagery you bring in, Star...words there dropping like drizzles...10

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Michael Gale 10 December 2008

I loved it! Abstract light caught deep inside a ghostly rain drop, Etc..Etc... Gave it a TENNER. God bless poets and their abstracted light-MJG.

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9 1 05 December 2008

Nice prose. Keep up the good stuff.

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Taylor Clayton 28 November 2008

this is a really good poems. i like it. i give it a 10'

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Blue Eyes 22 November 2008

i really like the way u used words.u have a unique way with language''not calling a spade a spade''

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