Flowers From A Funeral Poem by Susan Lacovara

Flowers From A Funeral

Rating: 3.9


I thought if I took the flowers home
Flowers from a funeral
For a friend
A friend whose face
Looked unfamiliar
Unaware I was even there
Unsure if she'd really care
For cotton candy carnations
Lavender last goodbyes
A burly man carried
The carefully concocted
Cascades of colorful blooms
Close to the dumpster
The day after
He, disconnected from the despair
That dangled about my thoughts
But thought well enough
To stop long enough
To catch my stare
And spare the sprigs and sprays
Of fresh freesia
From the squashing stench
Of the sanitation truck's crunching
And handed them over to me
Like presenting a beauty queen
Her lavish winning bouquet
At home, with the hum
Of a well working furnace
I put forth gallant effort
Picking purple plumes
From the florist's
Generic green foam
That held her final farewell
Gathered, I did in diligent work
Each vase from a collection of years
And brought to tears
Thinking if I watered them well
Placed beneath the light
Of my favorite window sill
Their fragrance to fill
My sadly lit room
Maybe, just maybe she'd stay
Awhile, share one more smile
Before being ready to say goodbye
Even the most beautiful bouquets
Wither wilt and die

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
(03/07/14) Silly, though it offered me solace
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jp Sullivan 18 March 2014

You write as SPONTANEOUS PROSE jack Kerouac invented spontaneous prose. Should look him up here. I love how your thoughts, feelings and intellect soars. If you don't mind me saying so, you write alot like Charles bulkowski. He's on here too! You got quite a talent that needs to be heard!

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Anthony Burkett 07 March 2014

Your pen... too sweet for words. Yes... I think she knew... and cared for the thoughts of a friend...

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Valerie Dohren 07 March 2014

Not silly at all Susan - a lovely sentiment, and one I can relate to right now having been recently bereaved.

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