Flawless? Poem by Denny Moonde

Flawless?

Rating: 5.0


Am not flawless.
In your hands am powerless.
Am fluorescent,
Does if any; Your kindness
Nibble at my blindness?
Fear of losing you;
Of life in the blue,
Without my beu.
Transcends logic.
Am lost in your magic.
Are my feelings tragic?
Am at ease with you in sight.
If it ends in delight.
The struggle aint a fight,
Pigheaded state of fright:
Soul tormenting slate.
Am a lost appetite;
Sometimes feelings are trite.
Flawless?

Wednesday, October 11, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: relationships
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bernard F. Asuncion 11 October 2017

Such a very nice poem penned in brilliance...10+++++

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Muntanga Denny Moonde 15 October 2017

Thank you Bernard

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Kumarmani Mahakul 11 October 2017

Amazingly drafted poem is shared here with brilliant expression. Sometimes feelings are trite. There is no need to fight. Having right mood is wise ever.10

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Muntanga Denny Moonde 15 October 2017

Thank you, Yep sometimes feelings are trite

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