Flash Of Steel Poem by Jeremy Eddy

Flash Of Steel



A flash
Of pointed steel
Is breaking up my heart
Forever in the darkness
Of death.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Joscelyn Alderdice 16 January 2009

Beautiful, just beautiful!

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Frances Macaulay Forde 27 October 2008

Another successful cinquain but perhaps a different title would work better: a word which sums up the theme.

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