Flames Poem by Rebecca Navarre

Flames

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Watch the flame. Listen.
May it render you tame.
It's not a joke.
It's not a game.
To be scorched, by
Heavens flame/pain. The
touch/feel. For lessons
in his name. For Sin, Always
ends the same.

Thursday, May 4, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: death,lessons of life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rebecca Navarre 01 August 2017

Thank You! ! ! Dr. Tony, For Such A Thoughtful Reply! ! ! ! ! And Yes...You Read It Perfectly! ! ! This Is Message I Was So Hoping! ! ! To Get Across! ! ! ! ! Thank You Ever So Much! ! ! ! ! :) You A Very Powerful Poet! ! ! ! ! Of Beautiful Heart And Mind! ! ! ! ! And Are Very Kind! ! ! ! ! Many, Many Blessings! ! ! ! ! And Smiles! ! ! ! !

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Dr Antony Theodore 01 August 2017

flame, sin, touch, feel the flame. it is not a joke. very fine reflections burning flame as a symbol of the pain of sin. so i understood it....... i dont know whether i am right. thank you dear poetess. tony

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