Flame On The Candle Poem by Sandi Riales

Flame On The Candle



Sitting here watching the flame on the candle
Wondering will I be able to handle
The pain and hurt
Deep within my heart.

Knowing that she's the one that
Torn us so far apart.

I ask myself, why did this happen,
We were so happy, or so we seemed to be.
I know deep down, she took him away from me.

I'm sitting here watching the flame on the candle,
Hoping that she'll be able to handle
The pain and hurt in her heart,
When he tears it apart.
When he leaves her for me.

Then she will know that you can't mess with what was meant to be.......

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nobody Special 29 April 2007

excellent poem. keep creating more.

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Atef Ayadi 27 April 2007

sincere, you expressed your pain well. carry on

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Derrick Clark 27 April 2007

that was a very nice flowing poem, good work.

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