Five Liner- Winter In The West Poem by Valsa George
Five Liner- Winter In The West
To escape the bite of frost at night
People slide their torso into tightly made beds
They wrap themselves in several folds of wool
Forming into cocoons and lie down hibernating
To emerge like butterflies in spring
This is a wonderful poem Valsa ma'am.. The comparison between butterflies and human beings is aptly placed and brings a joy to the reader.. Minutely observed, wonderfully crafted.. Thank you for sharing.
They wrap themselves in several folds of wool Forming into cocoons and lie down hibernating To emerge like butterflies in spring. Amazing style of narration of the hibernating compulsions of people in the west during winter. Thanks for sharing.10 points.
A beautiful painting on how to cope with the cold breezy weather of winter. A poetic gem in five lines. The two closure lines are just marvelous! So beautifully crafted with superb imagery. Five Marks! ! !
Wonderful imaginary and imagery. Beautifully portrayed the scene of winter. A great write.
Indeed..! ! Very well written Poem about winter of West! .. and wonder too is with Trees they Hibernate for whole Season! ! Thank you for sharing Poet!
White! With the beauty of the Snow. But very cold! ! Nice piece of work.
Beautiful imagery once again. Lie down hibernating to emerge like butterflies in spring....that's simply classy. The winter picture is painted with great finesse.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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5/6/2024 12:22:43 AM # 1.0.0.1119
A very apt description. Bundling up is cozier than the sweaty sheets of summer.