First Kiss Poem by Kelly Rose

First Kiss

Rating: 5.0


his fingertips slid along my back
applying hardly any pressure
yet sending shock waves over my flesh,
slowly, slowly, his hands moved
across my skin, down the sides of my stomach to finally rest in the curves of my hips
just below my ear, I felt his lips press against my neck,
followed by another kiss just below it
then another then another...
his lips moved from my neck toward my cheek an then finally found my mouth
we kissed, wrapping ourselves closer together
my blood burned within me
and i felt more alive in thyat moment than i ever had
I loved him, loved eric so much

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Hebert Logerie Sr. 23 August 2009

Romantically mellifluous way to perfectly describe a first kiss.

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Surya . 14 May 2009

i felt like a living commentary.so expressive.nice poem.posted 10 surya

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nic e descriptive piece with a fantastic ending.

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Brandon w 12 May 2009

shows a lot of emotion.and good detail.

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