PoemHunter.com

first date. by Julia Englund

12/1/2008 8:03:13 PM
Home Poets Poems Lyrics Quotations Music Forum Search Member Area Poetry E-Books Sites Mini Quiz
 

POEMS

LYRICS

MUSIC

QUOTATIONS

SEARCH

   
Julia Englund
( US)
   Poems  Comments  More Info  Stats  [message to the poet] 

 
 
<< prev. poem Poems by Julia Englund: 9 / 29 next poem >>
  
 
first date.
 
  across this table
quivering light-streaked lines, some straight, some long, all crooked and dazzling against the man-made lake beside us
course through our conversation.


i’ve been cold so long
my life stories spill out like hours-old eggs on a rusting plate,
set behind glass for affect-less observation
but i know how fresh they remain
for me.

your eyes shine, huge,
and
one of those tiny white lines bifurcates the blue-green iris of your left eye.
i just keep talking.

the food arrives,
animals and embarrassment creeping up around us,
threatening like known dangers found
in a cave of many-times-revisited adventure. fear.

we lighten it with laughter,
so funny about a first date—
you must compress two and more decades
of love, and hatred, and anger, and fear
into three to four stories, told with a smile, detached. flattering in your indifference to them.

the food is getting cold ‘cause
i won’t touch it
for fear this moment will become
just another glass-cased observation

to retell on the next
first date.

Julia Englund


User Rating:

10.0 /10
(1 votes)



 
Comments about this poem (first date. by Julia Englund)  more comments >>
Click here to write your comments about this poem (first date. by Julia Englund)
 
Sid John Gardner (6/1/2008 5:27:00 PM)
A wonderful write Julia....Got to say it you are my favourite poet on this site.So fresh and stylish..You stamp your talent on everything you write.You have an identity that clearly shows your independent mind.
Sid John xx
Gary Witt (1/14/2008 9:17:00 PM)
Ms. Englund: Very nicely done. You've picked out some really fine and poignant details and added a wonderful little metaphor in the incubator. I enjoyed this one a great deal. Thank you for sharing it.

-G

Read all 3 comments >>
People who read Julia Englund also read:
Classic poets in PoemHunter.Com:

The complete list >>

Lyrics

The complete list >>

QuickPoll
How often do you visit our website?
Once a day
Once a week
Once a month
Once a year

 Search in the World Poetry Database => 

 Search:   in:      tips
Hide the search box!

E-MAIL THIS PAGE TO A FRIEND - Found this page interesting? Recommend it to your friend! 
 Your E-mail:  
 Friend's Email:  
   
Your
Message:

 

(c) Poems are the property of their respective owners. All information has been reproduced here for educational and informational purposes to benefit site visitors, and is provided at no charge..  About Us | Copyright notice | Privacy statement | Help
12/1/2008 8:03:13 PM. You Are Here: first date. by Julia Englund

Home | Poets | Poems | Lyrics | Music | Quotations | Forum | Search | Random Poem | Free Poetry eBooks | Contests | Sites |
Submit a Poem | Manage Your Poems | Contact Us

Christmas Poems | Love Poems | Pablo Neruda | Death Poems | Sad Poems | Birthday Poems | Wedding Poems | Annabel Lee | Sorry Poems | Winter Poems