Fire By Smoke Poem by Gajanan Mishra

Gajanan Mishra

Gajanan Mishra

Tikapali, Patnagarh, Balangir, Odisha, India now at Tapobana, Titilagarh, Odisha, India
Gajanan Mishra
Tikapali, Patnagarh, Balangir, Odisha, India now at Tapobana, Titilagarh, Odisha, India

Fire By Smoke

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Fire by smoke
Duties by defects
Life by death.

Yes
I am a slave
To be a slave
Is a great mistake
Is not true.

I am performing some actions
And it involve violence
And it is desirable
Also undesirable
And undesirability is a defect.

Wrong performance is
Because of heedlessness
Or error.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sd Tiwari 18 May 2013

Very true, because of heedlessness is wrong performance. But about your third stanza I feel undesirable result is defect not undesirability.

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Neela Nath Das 18 February 2013

So true! You can express your opinion on any particular thing lucidly.Thanks.

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Gajanan Mishra

Gajanan Mishra

Tikapali, Patnagarh, Balangir, Odisha, India now at Tapobana, Titilagarh, Odisha, India
Gajanan Mishra
Tikapali, Patnagarh, Balangir, Odisha, India now at Tapobana, Titilagarh, Odisha, India
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