Fatal wounds of a worthless war
Inside my body the organs ache
Numb on the inside and out
All the bombs and bullets going off at once
Laying in a pool of blood and tears
Dieing isn't so bad at leasts theres no more fears
Acheing pain its never ending
Your war has taken another victim
So tell me what this war is really for.
woah, your pretty good i like the way its short, its amazing xx
WOW! ! ! .........Great Poem...It is full of pain....keeeeeeeep writing :) :) :)
this line says all... Dieing isn't so bad at leasts theres nomore fears i like this. its short, and very understandable of the pain that is behind it. GREAT JOB!
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I would like to translate this poem
''Laying in a pool of blood and tears Dieing isn't so bad at leasts theres no more fears'' a good visual metaphor(.................) .10+