Fighting Against The Time Poem by Marly Santos

Fighting Against The Time



Obtain information from you is hard,

And it´s breaking my heart,

I didn´t sleep last night,

Because you don´t love me.

But to me, love you is an art.

I´ll be waiting for you all my life

When you stayed with me you were the light of my eyes.

And now, I feel myself fighting

Against the time that got away my dreams in a flight.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr.subhendu Kar 13 December 2009

that happens to happen by time and space love when courses through curve of crest and trough, passionate yet poignant too,10+++, thanks for sharing

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Sameer Ahmed 28 June 2009

A very wonderful poem in context of the passing time. Time is indeed one of the most dangerous enemies of the mankind that if once bygone never returns. The feeling of adoration is apparent from the essence of the poem wishing to get the love back and for that you have chosen a new destiny by fighting against time and finding a pragmatic way.....10/10

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a realistic and touching poem.. we may not always win that fight but at least we try..marvelous write

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 23 December 2008

Beautiful poem.....Fighting against the time is destiny of every lover.

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You capture the all-too-often pain of a one-sided love well in this poem.

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