Fiercely One Dimensional Poem by john tiong chunghoo

Fiercely One Dimensional

Rating: 5.0


long, round, or triangle
immerse them into time
and they all straighten into
line one day or the other,
running into oblivion

time dilutes every thing into
one dimension, a track
not even the minute second
has a second chance to run
into the present

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Thad Wilk 31 March 2008

A short yet captivating write John! ! Great read! ! *10*! ! Best regards! Friend Thad

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Linda Ori 20 March 2008

The past was present, and the future will be present when it is. Interesting little piece. I prefere to exist where there is no time and just BE, but it's way difficult to do. 'The past is history, the future is a mystery, today is a gift. That's why they call it the present.' I've always liked that little saying. Linda :)

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john tiong chunghoo

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Sibu, Sarawak, Borneo East Malaysia
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