Feelings Poem by Joshua Decker

Feelings

Rating: 3.8


The sadness in my soul
Has left me in a hole
Thats six feet deep
And I can still hear you weep

The loneliness in me
Is deeper than you can see
I wanted everything for you
But I didn't know what to do

The voices in my mind
Aren't acting so kind
They cry out in madness
At my own sadness

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
DELETED NOW 26 June 2008

yea those voices never seem to help anything...only in rare occassions...which is rarely...r u claustorphobic?

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Harley Marie 22 June 2008

this poem is really deep and great explanations....

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Kee Thampi 27 March 2006

The voices in my mind Aren't acting so kind They '' this is a nice start in poetry my' beest' wishes for Joshua

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