Feeling One Alone Poem by Susan Ash

Feeling One Alone

Rating: 5.0


Where do I fit?
The more time goes by
The same answer
Keeps coming back -
Nowhere!
And with
No-one!

So few people
To really talk to
So few who really know
Or want to know
Me. And those
That sometimes do,
Can’t sustain it.

Yet what I offer
As a friend, companion,
Lover, goes way
Beyond what I see them
Give to each other,
What they give to me.

Superficial encounters,
The thrill of the moment.
All part of life,
But there is more.
Am I the only one
Who needs that?
Frightens most away.

So guess I’ll continue
Trying to live their way,
To avoid total isolation,
Keep up appearances
With my many ‘friends’.
But at the end of each day
I still feel one alone.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
David Taylor 24 May 2007

Why are we scared to get so close? Is it unseemly to coalesce. Real contact we all miss That I agree is where we may find bliss Ohh and I don't just mean flesh. Nicely expressed Susan.

0 0 Reply
Francesca Johnson 21 May 2007

Many of us can empathise with this one, Susan. You've captured the feeling so well. Love, Fran xxx

0 0 Reply
alice sunderland 18 May 2007

this really strikes a chord with me susan! well said and well written.(-and its nice to know im not the only one)

0 0 Reply
Angela Norris 11 May 2007

Not too worthy or wordy. Just honest and quite beautiful, Angela Norris

0 0 Reply
Scott Austin 10 May 2007

I believe that we all feel this way in our lives even though we may have many friends and family members around us. But we must understand that we are not alone even when we are. We have those memories to comfort us during those times and of course for those of us that believe in God he is there. May you you find peace and joy that you seek in your heart each and everyday. Scott

0 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Close
Error Success