Fear Poem by Abdul Basit

Fear

Rating: 5.0


gradually strolls on my soul
its fierce, harsh and cold
grasps ma heart squeezes out
hope that i hoped wud last out
sensation sent like m freezing inside
tide after tide, tide after tide
on the verge of suicide
my thoughts collide
its worse than the last i tried
strangling, stripped of placidness and hope
seems impossible to cope
confines ma behind ma limits
assassinates my soaring spirits
a voice cooes inside'my dear..
your experiencing a vivacious fear...'

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 22 June 2018

Deep feelings of sadness expressed in good diction from the heart. Very heartfelt with strong emotions. Thanks for sharing Abdul.

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Mellisa Smith 23 July 2006

This touched me. If a person has ever experianced simular feelings, they will appreciate it as well. I read your comment on the forum that you think your poems are childlike. I don't think they are. I like them very much.

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