Fate Poem by Jo Lee

Fate

Rating: 5.0


Not long ago things were just fine
not a care in this world, feelings sublime
suddenly these news came into world,
everything crashed over this young girl

How can this injustice occur
when life to us all is ensured
Please don't make her sacrifice
her life as the price.

The pain she must feel
alone and concealed
no one to understand her pain
how can she even explain,
her new life in a nightmare,
Living in a constant fear.

Now we can only wait
praying for her fate.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sarah Wes 23 April 2009

this is a sad poem. a sad yet beautiful poem. you reach to help her...yet there is no way anyone can help her....it is fate.

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i love this man! wonderfully written 10/10

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Ency Bearis 01 November 2008

great poem...nice write...keep on writing... Ency Bearis

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Emily Oldham 01 November 2008

your vocab works really well here... lovely... keep writing, thanks Athena *** words will change the world ***

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