Fate Poem by Marvin Brato Sr

Fate

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A fate...

Is like
a narrow trail
going straight
to a dead end.

Do you walk on it?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Diane Violet 08 November 2007

A ten for an excellent question...fate and destiny goes hand in hand it's all about the choices we make...the trail is only narrow if we make it so. Hugs, Diane

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John Tiong Chunghoo 28 June 2007

fatalism makes life so much more bearable. we can just blame it on fate everytime something happens. and of course, to cry over it.

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Blue angel Florida 26 June 2007

Scary! ...Or Maybe not...Why is the end dead if you can walk on it? Maybe is not, maybe fate is paradise...so then your message is Courage... Interesting...made me think! God bless you and our Fate!

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Marvin Brato Sr

Marvin Brato Sr

Davao City, Philippines
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