Fast Exit Poem by YURI DURAAN

Fast Exit

Rating: 5.0


I’m leaving in a hurry…

the same way I came

instant attraction
quick reaction
fast seduction

rapid heartbeat
5 thousand counts
a minute

5 thousand hours of
pent-up frustration
poured out in a
moment of sensation

and a second later
my whispered
goodbye

I’m leaving in a hurry…

Don’t say anything…

You won’t even see me go

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kesav Easwaran 03 May 2009

fast it comes...faster it leaves...momentary bliss...thank God! it has the courtesy at least to tell you before it leaves! 10

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Nkululeko Mdudu 30 April 2009

It would be best, if not expected for one to go the same way they came. nice read!

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Dewald Viljoen 20 April 2009

I hate those fast exits but at least they get the heartache over and done with!

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YURI DURAAN

YURI DURAAN

South Africa
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