Fast Asleep. Poem by Ann Beard

Fast Asleep.

Rating: 5.0


When all the world is fast asleep
and only sounds of breathing
ride moonbeams in the air.

Many ancient souls awaken
float above the hearts of lovers
slip into a dream with tender care.

They will occasionally find a space
and bearing gifts of conscience
will snuggle up as new life, barely there.

Some will sympathise with woe
or chuckle at tom foolery
others rid a sleep of deep despair.

The ghosts of all who walked before
are free to come and loath to go
Most of us, will never know they’re there.

Roan Feb 2008

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 23 February 2008

This cascades, like a smooth winding brook divides at a riverfork...I Like the triplet stanzaec construction, as well as the rhyme-sound continuation, ....Excellent work, Ann. ~ FjcR ~

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David Taylor 24 February 2008

Ann, I love this, the message and the flow of the verse. David

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Duncan Wyllie 01 March 2008

In dreams love is found Love duncan X

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Frank Cannon 01 March 2008

Influence presuposses `influential... the ghost of possibility...

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Sally Plumb Plumb 23 November 2015

Enjoyable ghost tale.

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Ann Beard 23 November 2015

Thank you Sally happy you enjoyed.

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Marie Bliss 02 July 2010

I love the subtlety with which this subject is spoken of. Well done.

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Sonya Florentino 17 January 2009

I like this one too.

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Brother Jonathan Gardner 18 December 2008

I like your poetry a lot, but this one is awesome. GBY, Brother Jonathan <

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Greenwolfe 1962 22 April 2008

I guess that's rather true, and spooky to think about. GW62

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