Drifting star, you left me dry
Oh how you shined through the night
Now as the sun is taking your place,
You are fading under a greater light
Star fades under a great light but still twinkling star has great dignity. This poem is very nicely and excellently penned with joy and beauty....10
A beautiful description of the night turning into day. Falling star is taken over by greater light! stunning wriite.
A wonderful poem. So beautifully written. Compelling imagery.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A succinct gem of a piece. Just marvelous. A fallen star can still give hope.