Fallen Star Poem by Bill Cantrell

Fallen Star

Rating: 5.0


Drifting star, you left me dry
Oh how you shined through the night
Now as the sun is taking your place,
You are fading under a greater light

Friday, May 24, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: poetry
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nosheen Irfan 04 June 2019

A succinct gem of a piece. Just marvelous. A fallen star can still give hope.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 25 May 2019

Star fades under a great light but still twinkling star has great dignity. This poem is very nicely and excellently penned with joy and beauty....10

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Aqua Flower 24 May 2019

A beautiful description of the night turning into day. Falling star is taken over by greater light! stunning wriite.

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A wonderful poem. So beautifully written. Compelling imagery.

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Kostas Lagos 24 May 2019

The beauty of the new day dawning.... excellent!

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