Fallen Poem by darkness reigns

Fallen

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I'm digging a hole
Deep and fast,
I cannot reach the top
As I sit on the ledge my legs dangle over the edge
I look above and below
'which to choose? ' I say
I drink my poison
I rip my wings from there position
And I reliqish my sword
As I jump...
I fell in love
A poison of the senses which should have not been done
I chased and chased after him
Till I cane upon...
I've dug a hole
Deep and fast
No way in no way out
My wings are gone
My liquor spent
Only one way to go...
My legs dangle of the edge
Then the air and ground rushes up to me
Then-

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Captain Cur 06 May 2012

Good poem, bad ending. Forget em'. My sails were never full enough to catch the ones I thought I loved. But full enough to catch the one I love.

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Dr.subhendu Kar 05 May 2012

passionately curved with imagery and metaphor yet with beauty to behold, thanks for sharing

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