Fairy Tale Love Poem by Terry Biscamp

Fairy Tale Love

Rating: 4.4


Is there really such a thing,
As unconditional pure love?
Or is it just a fairy tale,
That’s only dreamed of?

Who would really hold me,
All through the night?
And truly dry my tears,
And tell me everything’s all right.

Who could look into my eyes,
And honestly feel my soul.
Is there such a thing,
Of never being let go?

Who would not only,
Stand beside me, through thick and thin?
But leap in front of me,
And protect me to the end?

Promises are always made,
Only to be broken.
I think it’s probably best,
To leave all those unspoken.

And if love is such a good thing,
As I always thought it to be.
Then why is it so painful,
Left alone with only memories.

Love is an emotion
Passion felt so extreme
A small sweet taste of Heaven
Until you wake from your dream.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Paul Brookes 24 January 2017

A beautifully constructed poem of love and longing flowed like honey thanks enjoyed

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Kim Barney 24 January 2017

A very good poem. Well conceived and well written. Congratulations for having it chosen as Member Poem of the Day!

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Paul Brookes 24 January 2017

Beautifully composed poem of love and longing enjoyed thanks

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Bonnie Murray 02 April 2008

OMG! ! ! I love this poem it reminds me so much of the way i used to be when i first got with wilson its really good though i love you Bonnie

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Edward Kofi Louis 24 January 2017

Promises made! Thanks for shring this poem with us.

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Clarence Prince 24 January 2017

A is great value when it comes along, but may take strength to sustain....

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Bharati Nayak 24 January 2017

'Is there a thing like unconditional love', the poet asks, because a lover wants his beloved to be there always by his side in thick and thin, to share joys and sorrows, If lover leaves the loved one in time of tribulation, why he feels pain.- - -An intriguing question put through a lovely poem.To quote a stanza from this beautiful poem- - Love is an emotion Passion felt so extreme A small sweet taste of Heaven Until you wake from your dream.

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Anil Kumar Panda 24 January 2017

A very nice poem on the unconditional love. If it really exists or just an imagination. Congrats.

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Chinedu Dike 24 January 2017

Love is a spiritual experience that affects one profoundly - a voyage of pure bliss. However, it's also whimsical and temperamental, appearing unannounced and may leave without warning if it's not carefully nurtured at all times to maintain its bliss. Beautiful poem. A well articulated piece elegantly penned piece in good rhyme scheme with insight. Thanks for sharing Terry.

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Gladys Brown Prince 24 January 2017

A small sweet taste of Heaven Until you wake from you dream At least it gave us a hint of what heaven will be.

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