Fading Beauty Poem by Priyanka Bhowmick

Fading Beauty

Rating: 5.0


she's the core love of a poet,
beautiful, serene, she...
but no more her beauty remains,
for she's being murdered..
murdered by her children..
the ones who used to play..
play in her lap.. play with her..
they've grown up to be her murderer..
she wants to survive... but she can't.
for she's powerless..
She got an eternal place in each heart..
everyone loves her.. gazes at her charming beauty..
but she's been killed..
she's not a mother, neither a sister,
nor a lover...
but she's an utopia of every mind..
she's our Mother Nature.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Catrina Heart 19 July 2009

True we are the children who are killing our own mother Earth. Its loving beauty and grace are vanishing now. Soon its dazzling beauty will be one's utopia in mind....well said an environmental awareness poem...10+++

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Kesav Easwaran 31 July 2009

good thoughts...well conveyed...and nicely presented...thanks Priyanka...10

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Sadiqullah Khan 21 July 2009

Thats lovely simply, such a close relationship.10, priyanka.

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Kafil Uddin Raihan 19 July 2009

excellent mam, I appreciate your this poem, this thought, we all should come a head, raise our voice to save our mother nature, Thanks.

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Rakesh Bedi 19 July 2009

Lovely thought, priyanka; and impressively scripted!

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Indira Renganathan 19 July 2009

Right and timely concern and call....well done

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