Facing The Charm Of Light Poem by Mantu Mahakul

Facing The Charm Of Light

Rating: 4.5


Right in track I am now,
This provokes thought vow.
How do I come here in mist,
Now I should write in list.

Oh souls do gather soon you
Let me write in morning's dew.
Few of us do not wander, try,
Rice is testy with curry, fry.

Warmness of fire cooks food,
Having meal pure you be good.
I am facing the charm of light,
Night is cracked down in fight.

Bright light still gives smile,
Let me sing glory for a while,
This is really beautiful nature,
Let her wisely tell and nurture.

Sunday, November 1, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: life,spiritual
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Wes Vogler 24 November 2015

Mantu I watch your rhyming and it is improving greatly. (6 of 8) The message I believe is also clear. Good writing

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Valsa George 03 November 2015

Yes, Nature is beautiful, love and nurture her! Early morning is the best time to write rhymes, enjoying the beauty of Nature and the radiance of the first rays of light!

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Mantu Mahakul

Mantu Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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