Eyes Watching In The Dark Poem by Tan Pratonix

Eyes Watching In The Dark



Eyes watching in the dark, eye-balls
Rolling in my mind, asleep
I see owls glide through dusty halls
Where bodies hang from beams:
Choking nooses, spider webs
Round a gargoyle's grotesque head,
Belching fire from its mouth;
Flame spurting from a writhing mouse
With sudden shriek caught in its throat,
Carried away with dying note
From church-bells far away, and then
The silent dark floods me again.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Alison Cassidy 13 May 2006

This works well - strong evocative imagery. I particularly liked the line 'eyeballs rolling in my mind'. Alison

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Julia Klimenova 10 February 2006

Scary and bloodthirsty. I wonder, what would Freud say to this? :)

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