Their eyes were glued to each other
The two love birds enjoyed each others company
The food was not as tasty as the companionship
The eyes of love were passionate
He had turned a year wiser
They celebrated the wisdom together
A chitchat was the best for the day
The eyes of love were passionate
Why was the parting very difficult?
Why does time go on a race while together?
Did they need the entire day to just stare at each other?
The eyes of love were passionate
They parted ways with hope
The hope that God would protect them
The hope that there would be a tomorrow for them
the eyes of love were passionate
I stand amazed at your composition.Love the great force n hope to bring greater things ahead.
Beautiful depiction of the bliss of love, well articulated and elegantly brought forth. Lovely and very passionate. Thanks for sharing Rose.
You need to be with the one you love to reveal the love that you have for them.
Who can understand the way lovers behave to each other? ? You have described it well.
Well described lovers moment -always time seem shorter than the actual clock time....and then comes the confusion and anxiety. They parted ways with hope The hope that God would protect them The hope that there would be a tomorrow for them
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Passionate love! Thanks for sharing this lovely poem with us.