Dusk Poem by Rose Kanana

Dusk

Rating: 5.0


Dusk is here
I am taking stock of my day
I am smiling at most of my deeds
I made a covenant with God for the day
I kept the covenant to the letter
I shall retire a happy person

Dusk is here
I shared inspiring words with my family
I shared inspiring words with my friends
God managed my foes with love
I had reminded Him that my foes battles are His
So He took care of that

Dusk is here
I am appreciating the fine weather we had
I have learnt not to take the environment for-granted
I have learnt that things can change at the blink of an eyelid
I have learnt to stop and smell the roses
I have learnt that it only takes you to be the best version of you

Dusk is here
The women guild has wrapped up prayers
Parents are checking their children's school bags
Nothing is left to chances
We have to trust that there will be a tomorrow
We retire with the promise that the Angels are watching over us

Sunday, September 4, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: good night
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Appreciating the day and looking forward to a new day/week/month
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Gajanan Mishra 04 September 2016

there will be a tomorrow, but tomorrow never comes.

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Nancy Majau 04 September 2016

Beautiful, I made a covenant with God for the day I kept the covenant to the letter I shall retire a happy person

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Preston Mwiinga 07 September 2016

Dusk is here I am a good steward in life. I take account of my words, I use them in a right way. I take care of my body it is God's temple. I appreciate him by giving him back his 10% every blessing count because I live for a purpose. Dusk is here, Rose Kanana has just confirmed it. Thanx Rose for the great work

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James Mwenda 04 September 2016

Thanks for sharing Rose.A good message for the sabbath. God managed my foes with love I had reminded Him that my foes battles are His

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Siddartha Montik 05 December 2016

God managed my foes with love I had reminded Him that my foes battles are His So He took care of that.. wonder and Wish if only such thoughts would seep into the minds of all those that make trouble in this world and try make a Covenant with God, with the World.. and make it peaceful! thanks for sharing Poet! ! 10+++

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Jane Karanja 28 October 2016

Dusk is here I pull my loved ones near And amidst the challenges I choose not to fear Good job mams

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Rose Kanana 04 November 2016

hehehe you finally made it here gal, thanks for your comment momma.

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Collins Waswa 14 September 2016

I had such a good day and i had to come read this poem that gives hope

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Tom Billsborough 11 September 2016

A very thoughtful piece. I have learned to stop and smell the roses. Beautiful line and very wise too. Good one, Rose

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Ruth Nyokabi 07 September 2016

Wao! such an appreciative way of looking at things

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