Eyes Poem by Grasshopper Bot
Eyes
I felt them on me today
Your hazel brown eyes
From the distance you stared
You came, you cared
I felt them watch me unawares
But I just know you are there
Amidst the flowers, amidst the trees
You were there among the bees
Your haunting eyes couldn't leave me
And neither could my mind be free
There was nowhere for me to be
But in your arms you see
I disliked the comment of The Muse and I liked the comment Hassan Hayati. It's a beautiful poem and a well deserved selection as member's poem. Congrats.
Dear Sir, Me too.. we have different cultures and different perception..and this Poem has come from western side of culture and we need to respect it the way it was expressed! ! .. I do agree though for your sincere expression! !
So lovely a poem describing the enchanting eyes that at times haunt us, so much so that we seldom get away from it. Thanks for the sharing and congratulations for being picked as the member poem of the day.
Eyes are windows of the heart and all cares. This thought has been depicted in this beautifully crafted write. A great poem with compelling imagery.10
Great imagery is this very nicely written poem and congratulations on being POD! Eyes are the window to the soul! !
Very nice poem. I’ve always felt like a persons eyes were a highway to their soul.
We see the eyes clearly. Imagery is all that we need in a poem.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/27/2024 12:45:15 AM # 1.0.0.1119
An amateurish poem. The Administrators of this site have no idea what is good or bad. So they choose bad.
Agree wholeheartedly.