Eye Of The Son Poem by Carolynn Shaw

Eye Of The Son

Rating: 5.0


You say the gods packed up and left,
stripped the trees of zinc and spit
green into the waters

Just before dusk folded into night.
The time of shadows - that mingle
and fall on themselves

Stealing hope from sky and men.
It's a dark future you speak of -
built on speculation and bitterness

Contingent on resurrection of the dead.
Slurring your way through sunrise,
I see you are glaring through a mad mans eye.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Gina Onyemaechi 25 September 2007

'stripped the trees of zinc', 'spit green into the water', 'dusk folded into night', 'glaring through a mad man's eye' - tour de force, Carolynn. Simple as. Love, Gina.

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