Expectations Poem by shweta khosla

Expectations

Rating: 5.0


You're delight
You're life
You're breath
You're love
You're peace
You're joy

I step closer

I gasp
I cry
I squirm
I scream

I've loved
But a mirage

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shekhar Joshi 27 May 2009

A very good poem indeed. I love your style of writing...using not that big lines and yet conveying the message perfectly. very few can do that....Infact u r only the second poet who i have seen doing that. very very good work

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Dr.subhendu Kar 27 May 2008

love still exist by the mirage, wonderful imagery of lost love...well penned,10/10p, thanks for sharing

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 26 May 2008

marvelous concept.great write.

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Susan Jarvis 23 May 2008

A life's lesson told with sagacious eloquence. I too lost my heart to a mirage. S: (

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