Excitment Poem by Elizabeth Tews

Excitment

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Excitment-
It fills your body within seconds-
It makes your heart beat faster and faster and faster-
It just makes you want to SCREAM!
It gets your blood pumping-
You cant sit still-
Your mind is bobbling-
Oh! This feeling is so real!
I cant get rid of it!
'Only 2 more days! ' I tell myself
I just cant wait!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
William Jackson 09 March 2008

The poem makes the reader want to know what is going to happen to the speaker in two days.

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Mary Gordley 25 January 2008

You manage to deliver that excitement in your writing. It makes the reader excited for you as well. Thanks.

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