Everything And Everyone Poem by Uriah Hamilton

Everything And Everyone

Rating: 5.0


Coming to you
Along paths of dream clouds
From my little ramshackle house
In the tiny city of sorrow,
The flowers watch me dance
And clap their petal hands.

You reside in the west
In an apartment of magical words
Covering loneliness with desire;
I’m not a defeated man
When I find you,
My heart is renewed.

A child by a nearby lake
Skips a stone across the water
And the sound is melodic,
Maybe we’ll sit with him in the sunlight
And learn to enjoy
Everything and everyone.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mary Nagy 15 June 2006

I love the thought of your heart being renewed when you find her! I hope you do find her Uriah! You have so much in this poem that I love....flowers, lakes, skipping stones......another wonderful poem! Sincerely, Mary

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Emma Johnson 12 June 2006

Another tender piece. The fist stanza is disarmingly musical. Lovely. SUsie.

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Joseph Daly 12 June 2006

There is a feeling of real joy in this peice Uriah. The second stanza is particulary strong. I like the flow in this one, that is a product of the theme. The imagery that you employ is lovely.

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Sandra Fowler 11 June 2006

What a lovely poem world you have created here. Write on, Uriah. Kindest regards, Sandra

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Theorem Thetruthserum 11 June 2006

I liked this one...it is a good example of bad to good. Very nicely written.

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