Erroneous Perceptions Of Reality In A Late Afternoon's Sun Poem by Ted Sheridan

Erroneous Perceptions Of Reality In A Late Afternoon's Sun

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There is just something very sexy
about the way she twists and plays
with that short section of fine hair
on the left side of her pretty head; wrapping
it around her index finger and painted nail
as she glances into her car's rearview mirror
while she waits for the light to turn green
Meanwhile I stare at her in wonderment and pray…
that we are stuck in traffic forever…
The fantasy ends as the car behind me
honks for Jesus…

2008 © T Sheridan

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ivan Donn Carswell 23 March 2008

Great poetry gazing at the rear of a future which went that-a-way! Rgds, Ivan

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Dee Daffodil 17 March 2008

Aren't fantasies grand? ? ! ! Hugs, Dee

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Chris Mendros 14 March 2008

Yup, been there, and, strangely, i don't think taking a picture would make it last longer.

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Thad Wilk 13 March 2008

Very good Ted, i can just picture that scene now! Thanks for the share! ! *10*! ! Best regards, Friend Thad

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