Enough Said Poem by Jeremy Eddy

Enough Said

Rating: 5.0


“Votes for women! ”
Was the cry.
Reaching upward,
To the sky.
Crashing glass,
And flashing eye-
“Votes for women! ”
Was the cry.

“Boats for women! ”
Was the cry.
When the men
Were come to die.
When the end
Was drawing nigh
“Boats for women! ”
Was the cry.

Life has many
Little tests.
Insignificant
As jests.
Doubt and bitterness
Assail.
But “boats for women! ”
Tells the tale.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Joscelyn Alderdice 16 January 2009

A poem with a beat you can dance to, lol! This is a very well written poem :)

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Frances Macaulay Forde 27 October 2008

The rythum of this piece works well. An interesting juxtaposition of ideas in the 1st and 2nd stanzas. Although it works, I think the third stanza needs one more edit... But well done again!

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