: (Ending In Death! ! ! Poem by chelsi Ruffing

: (Ending In Death! ! !

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You said you were always there
You said you would never leave me
Now I know that was all a lie
You never cared at all
I’m sitting here with blood on the floor
My wrists are cut so deep
Your no were to be found
I’m dying and you don’t know
I start to feel dizzy then I fall
Hitting the ground ever so hard
Lying there with blood around me
Screaming someone save me!

You said you were always there
You said you would never leave me
Time is just running out
The light slowly fades away
My heart beats slower
I guess you never cared to begun with

You said you were always there
You said you would never leave me
My eyes slowly close
As my breath fades to nothing
My heart comes to a stop
As everything goes black
That’s how it ends
All in death
All because you were never there

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Reshma Ramesh 24 March 2009

deep and a sad poem of a broken heart well penned

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Melvina Germain 16 September 2006

Oh yes, I'm so sorry, I should have also mentioned that Death is not an ending, it is a (BEGINNING) .--Melvina

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Melvina Germain 16 September 2006

Very good poem-It all depends who 'You' is referring to, if it is a lover, well hmmm, however if it is God, well of course he's there, he would never leave you, he would carry you through your trying times. If you personally had those thoughts of which you write, then you know that to be true, becasue you were able to write this poem. So, where is God, He's everywhere.

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